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i love when people say "how are you"
a bland greeting devoid of meaning
if i took their hypocrisy at face value
their eyes would glaze over in a passionless numb
or maybe they would hear my words
maybe id be open
and their eyes would widen in shock
maybe even horror
hearing how i am
bloodstained kid with a knack for pain
the throes of disenfranchisement
smashing my head against the curb
or maybe their eyes would half close
the corners crinkling like crepe paper in a childs hands
and they would laugh
either thinking i was joking
or
knowing that i was a joke
one question
two eyes
infinite truths
©2007-2009 ~evaporatedheart
:iconevaporatedheart:

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:iconasentimentalguy:
Hey, I signed in and saw this on the front page ^^ Nice writing :)

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Life begins when you can die happy
:iconstevegircys:
Wow. So true. I love it!
:iconmygloryisyoursunrise:
nice... dark but good <3 gotta love all that dark moonlight

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"To love is truly divine." ~The Magic Flute
:iconrikuhottie263:
dude, you're like toooooo goood! hey, um, what does "disenfranchisement" mean? >>;

btw, this was like, REALLY GOOD!!!! my fav line was, "...bloodstained kid with a knack for pain..." love it.

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"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like, and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
~Bilbo Baggins ~LotR

my new site~ ~hannah-m-bella
:iconevaporatedheart:
disenfranchisement technically means the depriving of the right to vote, or any other privelege or right.

and thanks ^^

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i want to paint a heart across your lips and then smudge it forever...
club member lists i besmirch: *RawEm0tion ~Poetic-Peace
i took a bottle of pills
but instead of dying
i pooped all over our bed
which is a funnier story
:iconevaporatedheart:
haha thanks

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i want to paint a heart across your lips and then smudge it forever...
club member lists i besmirch: *RawEm0tion ~Poetic-Peace
i took a bottle of pills
but instead of dying
i pooped all over our bed
which is a funnier story
:iconevaporatedheart:
thank you :)

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i want to paint a heart across your lips and then smudge it forever...
club member lists i besmirch: *RawEm0tion ~Poetic-Peace
i took a bottle of pills
but instead of dying
i pooped all over our bed
which is a funnier story
:iconevaporatedheart:
thank you...

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i want to paint a heart across your lips and then smudge it forever...
club member lists i besmirch: *RawEm0tion ~Poetic-Peace
i took a bottle of pills
but instead of dying
i pooped all over our bed
which is a funnier story

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